Tuesday, 2 February 2016

@Phil - From Script to Screen: Storyboard Page 1 - Issues with Showing Time Passing

This is the first page of my storyboard. However, I am struggling to show that time has passed since the Seer last inspected the crystal ball. So far, the only indication of time passing is the age of the person within the crystal, but the audience may just assume she is looking at a different crystal completely. Any help with fixing this issue would be appreciated. 

1 comment:

  1. I think the answer is probably as simple as building some kind of giant clock-face or calendar into the design of the factory, which you cut back to etc between the various shots: so maybe something like this in a mechanical sense: